Attempt at Forum Fic. (Comments)

[isbird100]

Ok guys lets try this.

Before you start posting in this you should create a character and create a bio for him/her and post it on the character page.

Story:At sometime a group of teens get superpowers. Why? When? Where? i guess that is up to us now isn't it?

Setting: A suburban town, not large enough to be known, but large enough that everyone DOESN'T know every else. A few miles to the east there is a city that has all of the usual chains, A movie theatre, a Teen dance club( Why not?) etc etc. To the west there are plently of farms, open fields and other places that people may not visit normally unless they live there. To the south there is a dense forest, containing trails, bike paths, and a few good places to fish. To the north of the town is that runs east to west( again why not?) The town is somewhere in the midwest( just because most of us are from the midwest.) The centor of the town is where one of the schools is, as well as where everything from the local doctor to the restaurants are located. The eastern part of the town is where the richer people live, and the west is where the not so rich people live. It progresses that way from east to west.

Time of the year: A few weeks before finals, spring is having a late start and plants are just beginning to grow again. Lets start on a friday night.

Well what do you guys think?? I hope it's not too bad...

Another thing: there is going to need to be some kind of conflict beyond the super power thing so I would appreciete it if some people took on a villianous role, like people this happened to before but use their powers for immoral reasons for example.

[the guffman]

So what is north of the town that runs west?

[The Reporter]

Time sounds good, I could help come up with some conflicts, and maybe some explanations for some powers too...

[isbird100]

lolz

a river

I think faster then I can type and that causes problems some times.

Glad to see at least two people care enough to comment.

And thats good.

[Samarai1]

could work!

[Weeber33]

are the people going to be like us?

[isbird100]

Do you mean are we playing as ourselves?

If you want to sure, I know I will be doing someone kinda similar to me but not. You can be anyone as long as they are human and not perfect.

[navy pig]

sweet
wouldnt it b easier if the characters were like us and we used ppl we didnt like as the bad guys

[isbird100]

I guess you could but that wouldn't be fun if you ask me. But that's just my opinion

[navy pig]

its all good
so whos gonna start

[isbird100]

I don't know, whoever wants to I guess.

[the guffman]

It'd be nice to use this topic for comments and remarks about my fic, eh? eh?

[The Reporter]

Well, I can safely say I like where this is going. Although the whole, "old grandma and kid" thing seems kind of generic, I think it was a nice tie to how living in Soul Society is.

[the guffman]

Yeah, I thought it was a bit cliche too, but I did have to start somewhere. Anyways, this next piece kind of jumps from the end of Episode 2 to the point where Hunter and Jason (my character) are already in the Soul Reaper Academy. There's also another new character or two introduced in this episode,

[the guffman]

Episode Seven is finally up! We see several new characters in this one, as well as quite a bit of development on everyone. Heavy dialogue makes this one kind of lengthy, but it's quite the lead up chapter to the epicness in store for Episode Eight!

[the guffman]

Episode Ten now up. Sorry this one took so long, but you can probably guess as to why this one was such a block for me to get around. Introducing ALL the graduates and their nameless classmates to each of their squads, as well as introducing several new characters per squad seemed impossible, so I had to come up with some other idea on how to go about this. Episode Eleven should come up much sooner than this one, but no guarantees.

Just so we're clear though:

Jason and Kendra ----- Squad Ten
Hunter and Joey ----- Squad Two (The Stealth Force)
Jon ----- Squad Eleven (physical attack based)
Dylan ----- Squad Seven
Ryan (and posse), Kassandra ----- Squad Nine
Ben ----- Squad Four (the medical specialists; he's assigned to Squad Seven)

Other characters' positions like Lucas, Rebecca, and Aiden will be revealed later.

[The Reporter]

Woohoo, I like where this is going so far.

[rising_phoenix45]

From reading the first cupple eps, I like it enough to keep reading, but then again, I'm such a sucker for Bleach XD

[the guffman]

Never took you for an anime fan...

Anyways, Episode Eleven is up. This one adds more to the characters behind Squad Two, Squad Nine, Squad Ten, Squad Eleven, and the newly introduced Squad Thirteen, as well as providing a small amount of real combat involving Pickle and Squad Seven.

[Pickle]

one word: super-epic-awesome-win(d)-sauce.


R.I.P. Weeber...

[the guffman]

Lol, Weeber only has a brief part in this next one, but Episode 12 is up. We're introduced to some actual captains here, and we start to see some real plot begin to develop. Squads Ten and Thirteen have significant roles here, but more are going to show up in the next episode.

[the guffman]

Ep. 13 up, this one's a doozy!

[the guffman]

Episode Fourteen is up, and this one is mostly centered on Squad Two's first real kill in the Hollow organization. We also see several new Zanpakutou here as well, and a bit more on characters like Rebecca, Weeber, and those in Squad Ten.

[Pickle]

joey made me lol

[the guffman]

Lol, Joey does eat living things

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